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Listening

I listen to him nodding to his beliefs held on sacred forms et al. . . wishing him away to chase swallowtails and cricket song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/24/2015 6:22:00 PM
A great tanka, Thomas! I like it! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/24/2015 4:09:00 PM
Thomas, a wonderful tanka you have written, A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, beneath, yes I can believe that there could be an underground world on Mars
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