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"it happens just because we need to want, and to be wanted too...when love is here or gone to lie down in the darkness and...listen to the warm." - Rod McKuen I feel it deep in my soul; the warmth of our love. When we met, two lonely hearts, became one ... sad, it was not forever.... Nevermore, will I feel your sweet lips upon mine, nevermore will I feel your sweet embrace. You lie down in the darkness, now my dear, yet I love you still. My tears fall on your tomb, oh can you feel the warmth of my sad heart? In dreams, I call you, come my love, I want to hold you to my heart tonight and feel you caress my raven hair. Whisper how much you love me, I need to hear your voice, that deep melodic warmth till dawn, then fly away love. I need to travel that long winding road to your tomb, I want to be with you although you are gone, passion is warm still. This is a love eternal, oh wait for me, darling, one day we will be united at those heavenly gates, wait for me. I still recall that day we first met ...I was...dizzy Your smile and voice held me hostage... I lay my cheek upon your tomb and my soul is bleeding from my forever scar. I asked you, please don't go, stay home with me, we could have stayed sweetly tangled in the sheets. You laughed at me and walked out into a snowstorm, In my dream, I heard the crash and metal crumbling, and I knew. Come darling, the moon is high in the sky tonight and I need to see your face and feel your embrace. The warmth of your breath, and I want your sweet kiss. I need to be with you until the dawn calls you back into the darkness ... my dear. ...forever is the warmth of our love~ _______________________________ April 19, 2016 Poetry/Prose/Listen to the Warmth Copyright Protected, ID 16-780-484-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Listen to the Warmth, sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 5/13/2016 2:48:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your "Warm-Prose Contest Win" XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/12/2016 10:52:00 AM
The depth of the love struck me as much as the gravity of the loss. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/12/2016 5:24:00 AM
Your poetry comes from such deep hurt and sorrowful loss. It's sad yet beautiful, but I know your strength and I admire you for it. hugs for your win.
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Date: 5/12/2016 4:57:00 AM
Constancee as usual I am spell bound with your words! Nevertheless, congrats on your oustandingu placement in Laura Loo's Listen To The Warm Prose Contest!
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Date: 5/11/2016 11:03:00 PM
Hi Broken Wing, Congrats on yet another impressive win with this hauntingly beautiful tale of eternal love. Well skillfully written and deeply absorbing. Cheers, Brian
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Date: 5/11/2016 6:01:00 PM
congratulations on your win, very emotional, cuts deep with pictures it reveals
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Date: 5/11/2016 1:03:00 PM
I can't say I'm surprised to see you at the top in this contest. Your writing is always so emotionally powerful. Congrats on the contest; this is beautifully written. You are a very talented writer. -G
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Date: 5/11/2016 1:00:00 PM
A great congrats on your win with this beautiful poem filled passion my lovely friend my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/11/2016 9:00:00 AM
Your loss in life makes you put your soul into your write that's why your a great writer O:-) Congratulations on your win!!!
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Date: 5/11/2016 7:49:00 AM
oh Broken Wings..what can I say? This is beautiful as always... thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your top placement :)-luloo
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Date: 5/5/2016 4:20:00 PM
Eternal love flows in your write...emotional and heart breaking.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/5/2016 6:04:00 PM
MR, aaah yes heartbreaking is a good description of this forever and eternal love ~
Date: 4/19/2016 8:53:00 PM
"This is a love eternal"....this write is all about eternal love! Nice Broken Wings!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/24/2016 10:36:00 PM
walter thanks for visiting and for the lovely comment

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