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Listen To the Warm

In a marriage day party i was there talking with a friend while a dancing program was going on the stage i have seen a beautiful girl and a handsome boy were dancing together with the rhythm of the music played there in along with the other invitees of the marriage party Their dance was so wonderful that majority of the invitee-audiences were enjoying and appraising them loudly But i marked an interesting thing that among all the participants many danced well but only their dance captivated the majority invitee-audiences and me too They danced keeping eye in eye, hands with hands and legs with legs as they were both mesmerized in their dance After returning from the marriage party i came to know that they were real lovers Then i was certain that the magic of dance was only the warmth of their loving hearts what the other dancers were missing while dancing Loving hearts are always warm and warm hearts are always loving i am now sanguine Written on 19th April, 2016 Contest sponsored by:Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 5/13/2016 2:54:00 AM
BL, Congratulations on your "Warm-Prose Contest Win" XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/13/2016 9:07:00 AM
Thanks my lovely *friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 5/12/2016 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 5/12/2016 12:32:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 5/12/2016 5:33:00 AM
Devnath congrats on your wonderful placement in Laura Loo's Listen To The Warm Prose Contest!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 5/12/2016 10:22:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 5/11/2016 11:56:00 PM
very nice and congrats on your win
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Bl Devnath
Date: 5/12/2016 10:21:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 5/11/2016 8:26:00 AM
BL, .thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Bl Devnath
Date: 5/11/2016 12:04:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for giving me placement in the contest held by you. Loved always, bl
Date: 5/1/2016 5:11:00 AM
When there is warmth between two people, it has a way of always shining through. Such a lovely expression, and much enjoyed!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 5/1/2016 9:08:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 4/18/2016 10:27:00 PM
Nice presentation.I enjoyed. Keep writing....with love.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/19/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 4/18/2016 7:37:00 PM
Hi BL: May I say that this prose WAS warm and epitomized the lovely way you expressed the dance and love together. My compliments!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/19/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for stopping by. Loved always, bl
Date: 4/18/2016 5:00:00 PM
Beautifully written, BL. I could feel the warmth of love in your words. I wish you all the best for Laura's contest! Sandra
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/18/2016 5:04:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment with credit and for your wishes. Loved always, bl

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