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Listen To the Warm

"It happens just because we need to want, and to be wanted too, when love is here or gone to lie down in the darkness and... listen to the warm.” -Rod McKuen
Look deep into my Springtime and listen to the warm Leave all traces of winter behind Listen closely...and you'll hear the drip drops fall from that ice crystal fortress that surrounds your heart. I understand why it's there But now that it's melting away, it's easier to be able to Listen to the warm... The drips from your heart's fortress have formed a babbling brook With bated breath you board the boat with me Soon the topaz water's gurgling sound is in sync with your breathing And you relax Our destination? A cozy little cottage, in the middle of no where, but home to us Beneath our feet the lush green grass is speckled with wild flowers You pick a magenta one, and place it in my hair Like a couple of kids on a play date, we clasp hands and scurry across the field, our laughter echoing along with our steps We see that the door is ajar, a fluffy turquoise rug beckons us Snuggling upon it, I find the rug is even softer than it looks, as is your skin Soon the thunderous din of your heartbeat is in sync with mine Quite a rhythm section amid hushed whispers and the babbling brook outside our window
It becomes our lullaby, as we dream within this dream, we continue to Listen to the warm... Allowing the warmth to embrace us, our hearts say, that everything will be okay...
4/17/16

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Date: 5/13/2016 2:50:00 AM
Dineen, Congratulations on your "Warm-Prose Contest Win" XOX ~LINDA~
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 7/2/2016 9:14:00 PM
Forgive my lateness in responding Linda, don't know how I missed this. Thank you for your congratulations.
Date: 5/11/2016 11:07:00 PM
R O M A N T I C and so beautifully penned, congrats on your win
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/12/2016 10:14:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment as well as the congrats Broken Wings.
Date: 5/11/2016 1:19:00 PM
Beautifully written, and congratulations on your well-earned placement in the contest. -G
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/12/2016 10:11:00 AM
How kind of you to say Grahambur, thank you so much!
Date: 5/11/2016 1:09:00 PM
Congrats a lot on your great win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/12/2016 10:09:00 AM
Your congrats are much appreciated, thank you BL!
Date: 5/11/2016 9:28:00 AM
I knew this was #1...Congrats on your win Dineen
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/12/2016 9:57:00 AM
Wow Joseph, I thank you for that, as well as your congrats!
Date: 5/11/2016 7:53:00 AM
Dineen, thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your top placement :)-luloo
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/12/2016 9:56:00 AM
Laura, great contest, and I thank you so much for your kind consideration! :)
Date: 5/6/2016 12:42:00 PM
Congrats on your poem being in Andrea's favs and on the winners' page..Sara
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/6/2016 1:20:00 PM
I appreciate the congrats Sara, thank you much!
Date: 5/1/2016 6:57:00 PM
Dineen, Congratulations on your win in Andrea's fave contest. XOX - LINDA
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/6/2016 1:18:00 PM
Thank you Linda, your support is so appreciated!
Date: 4/30/2016 4:00:00 AM
wow, that was fantastic. Really enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. Cheers. Craig
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/1/2016 3:52:00 AM
Quite nice of you to say, this was fun to write, thank you!
Date: 4/23/2016 3:29:00 PM
Beautiful poem in contest my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/1/2016 3:51:00 AM
I appreciate your comment BL, thank you.
Date: 4/22/2016 12:12:00 AM
wow, I really really like this. GREAT romantic writing. I kind of went the same way with mine (not yet posted). But I set mine in a winter love theme by the fire place. a SEVEN Hmm, I think I will fave it too!! I'm a sucker for romance.
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/1/2016 3:50:00 AM
Such a kind comment, I thank you for that, and for the fave as well. I love romantic pieces also. And of course, looking forward to reading your poem. :)
Date: 4/20/2016 10:04:00 PM
Well penned Dineen...A7...best wishes
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/21/2016 8:25:00 AM
How kind of you, thank you very much.
Date: 4/17/2016 8:58:00 AM
Beautiful! Perfect for the contest! Love it.
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/17/2016 9:16:00 AM
You humble me Susan, thank you very much!

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