Listen Carefully
Sorry, can't agree with your witless views.
To me friendship demands to say drawback.
Worry, weaknesses in thought will confuse.
Be free from sadistic thoughts just to wrack.
Tell me, If I don't tell, who else will say?
You're interfering on personal space.
Agree, your actions lost trust, don't betray;
they are dependent on your gentle grace.
Don't try to control life, HE can decide,
can fix problems in life, knows each aspect
Wise guys know well, tell only HE can guide;
Your tricks won't help, HE surely will protect.
Listen carefully HE is guiding us,
fixing each of our issues, none can cuss.
~X~X~X~
The elements of the Beymorlin Sonnet are:
-written in a quatorzain made up of 3 quatrains and a couplet.
-metered, primarily iambic pentameter.
-double rhymed, rhyme scheme abab cdcd efef gg with a separate
internal rhyme in the same pattern as the end rhyme.
- The internal rhyme should occur within the first two syllables of each line.
The internal rhyme is underlined to help to see the pattern: abab, cdcd, efef, gg.
-composed with the epiphany arriving slowly after the 2nd quatrain.
Pasted from http://everysonnet.blogspot.com/2012/11/beymorlin-sonnet.html
Thanks to the efforts of Mr. Lawrence Eberhart for a wonderful resource at the Poets COLLECTIVE site.
Copyright © Pratap Roy | Year Posted 2021
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