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Serenity reigns Water drops in silken threads Beauty sings softly For Raul's contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 4:56:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 6/9/2011 5:29:00 AM

Breath-takingly beautiful, Barbara. Many congrats on your FIST PLACE WIN. Lainie

Russell Smith

Date: 6/8/2011 7:04:00 PM

congrats on your first place finish

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/8/2011 5:01:00 PM

Congrats on 1st Place, Barb. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/8/2011 4:47:00 PM

This is the craziest thing...this is not my poem for the contest...it was a tail-rhyme..I think that is what Brian judged..somehow this old poem has come up...sorry..Ill be in touch with Brian..BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2011 2:05:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Barbara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/8/2011 1:49:00 PM

what a beauty, barbara... sweet congrats for the top win! :) huggs

Cecil Hickman

Date: 10/18/2009 9:51:00 PM

a beautifully written Haiku, that secures tranquility from the entire piece,,Thank you for your words that you left behind after reading mine,,,Blessings..Cecil

Abe Lopez

Date: 10/9/2009 5:31:00 PM

I love the songs of rivers...great job and good luck in the contest!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/9/2009 6:43:00 AM

A beautiful haiku, Barbara! It leaves the reader with a greater appreciation for the sound of rain. Love you! Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/8/2009 2:30:00 PM

beautiful, good luck in the contest

Veronica Joseph

Date: 10/8/2009 12:45:00 PM

tanquility calmed me reading these words. excellent.

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/8/2009 10:51:00 AM

"Serenity reigns" I like the first line... The rest was good too.....:JP]

Marty Owens

Date: 10/8/2009 9:51:00 AM

Love this...Good luck on the contest. Marty

Daver Austin

Date: 10/8/2009 7:58:00 AM

A beautiful whsper, Barb. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2009 5:54:00 AM

Wishing you the best in Raul's contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Donna Golden

Date: 10/7/2009 11:05:00 PM

This is breathtaking, Barbara. Ahhhhh....breathing a sigh of relief, for I needed this at the end of a long day. Hugs, Donna

Date: 10/7/2009 4:36:00 PM

Love the second line--such a peaceful feel. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/7/2009 2:43:00 PM

Dear Barbara, This is a winner Congratulations YOU have definitely seen the inside of the picture Raul will truely enjoy YOUR input Good Luck YOURS ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG

James Fraser

Date: 10/7/2009 1:47:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Barbara >> good luck in Raul's contest >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2009 1:40:00 PM

Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Sara