Listen

No one can hear me I shout with my loudest voice Only a whisper

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Geoffery Mchugh

Date: 10/1/2009 3:17:00 PM

Provacative poetry, Kimberly.

P Sheart

Date: 9/27/2009 5:29:00 PM

Hi Kimberly I know the feeling, but deep down I think they do!? Very thought provoking hun. I love the feeling you convey here with this excellent Haiku! Thanks for sharing. Take care, Also, thanks for your comment my friend. Love Light Truth Patricia

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 9/27/2009 5:01:00 PM

They do hear you, but they're only waiting for their turn to speak. Sometimes you can almost feel them waiting for you to finish your thought and the millisecond you do, in they chime with their amazing insights into how much they enjoy the sound of their own voice. As you so aptly put it, they just don't listen...Excellent poem, loved every word.

John Freeman

Date: 9/27/2009 4:50:00 PM

Very interesting thought Kimberly. Sincerely Moses