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Liquid Sunshine

Rain rain go away come back another day Skies are pouring liquid sunshine listen to what I say Can't bring me down No sad face or frown Flying high nothing can stand in my way

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James Horn

Date: 8/3/2021 9:33:00 AM

You are almost a 666er. When I was just a kid, Liked my sodas liquid; Was hard to explain Why they went down drain God them He did forbid.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/3/2021 2:24:00 PM

A limerick Sir James!!! Haven't checked recently... am I really at the ominous 666? LOL Holy Doo Doo!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/3/2021 5:42:00 AM

A positive attitude! Liquid sunshine powers up sunflowers and Jack’s happy smile!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/3/2021 7:12:00 AM

Awww! Hap hap happy day, dear Kim XOXOX

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/3/2021 1:11:00 AM

Rains ok in moderation but not downpours lol. Hope you're keeping well Jack. Never be a stranger. Tom

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/3/2021 7:16:00 AM

You've got it Sir Thomas!!! Everything's cooking here! How's about jolly old?

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/2/2021 6:55:00 PM

When the rain is falling on your face - It’s a good thing for the human race - Also for plants and trees - All creatures, birds and bees - A drink of water, how sweet’s the taste…… Belle

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/3/2021 7:21:00 AM

Love it Miss Belle! Happy limerick!!! love from here to where you are with love and hugs XOX