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Liquid From Above

Looking above seeing these dark clouds giving a forboding negative look makes you think something about to come might even install a brand new brook Everyday we look for the forecast to see what weather we're about to get whether it be sun snow or clouds our smiles departs when it says wet That liquid drops from the sky it's wet damp cold and runny so miserable it effects so negative why can't it just be sunny? But this is what does happen when cloud bursts sending rain especially if it's a really heavy shower goes right through you giving a stain Rain has it's good points though it's needed for crops to grow think of food we wouldn't have also makes the gardens a great show

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Date: 4/29/2016 1:29:00 AM
Good job Gordon. We need some of the wet stuff In Southern Australia though, we are in severe drought. Did enjoy the read. Regards, Craig
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 4/29/2016 2:18:00 AM
Thanks Craig, glad you liked it, hope you get rain soon, could send you some from Scotland ad we've had plenty!
Date: 4/28/2016 10:50:00 AM
I really can relate to this at the moment ... wish we could see some sunshine Gordon:-( We are having more than our fair share of the wet stuff here on our little Island along with sleet hail and snow - I long for our 2 days of summer lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/28/2016 10:58:00 AM
thanks Jan, yes totally agree with you, we had heavy snow shower this morning, couldn't believe it!, we were in Italy last week with sunny 24c after returning so hard to cope with the cold winds at present. yes wish summer would come soon, blessings, Gordon

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