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Lips of Swell and Fire--Collaboration Poem With Mystic Rose

Her power, unrestrained, sweet as honeysuckle rose Doth grant me, but a glimpse, of what I rave to find I fall in misty meadow where the Bluebells brightly grow Hot kisses stirring in the wind, cool my fevered mind While I in yonder wait, for my love to take me home Doth grant whom access Lord, the soul for him it pines At the foothills of my love, each heaven star a-glow Saccharin kisses in the blow, no longer in confines He picks me up and raises me to cordial place, desire I know him, he knoweth me, by lips of swell and fire! Written in collaboration with Mystic Rose I wish to express my appreciation to Rose For her ideas, talent--and inspiration Mel *** :)

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/19/2014 12:48:00 PM

so charming, now my dears you need give us 4 more lines to make it a sonnet [14 needed ;)] line 3 is my favorite! Light & Love

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/18/2014 2:54:00 PM

Really a nice read. Comments are hard to come by lately, so don't fret..( like I do.haha).. Your distant relative..BG

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/18/2014 11:20:00 PM

Hey, the other Merrill. You should have me over to dinner. We Merrills must stick together. It is a proud name and a proud heritage. I'm glad you liked the poem, but comments are like gold around here--though my post from last night did OK. Tonight I explain the conumdrum who is me. I might be sorry I did :) Have a great Easter. Love and peace. mel :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/15/2014 12:08:00 PM

So pleased you got this posted too Mel its a fabulous write with Rose - If you both post you get double the amount of comments which you can share. Hugs Jan x

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2014 1:40:00 PM

Don't worry about the lack of comments Mel. I've found the same over the past few days - I have made you a favourite so will drop by to see your works. Meanwhile, the more you comment (in theory) the more you should get comments back - been average 10% for me lately so that theory blown out the water lol. Had better day today posted collaboration poem and some awesome feedback. Hugs Jan xx

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/15/2014 1:26:00 PM

Hi Jan, good to see you again, and to read your always helpful comments. I'm curious about my comments--why I receive comparatively few. I might soup mail you this evening with that question. Meanwhile, know I value and appreciate your visits and feedback. Love to you, Jan mel :)