Lips

At the entrance to the den, Lips rest like sleepy wolves. Poems linger here and howl like Jonah.

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Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 5/9/2009 8:53:00 AM

WOW ... and I mean WOW ! Expertly delivered Tamara... precise and careful... full impact ! outstanding ! .... ps thank you so much for your comment on The Faces of Terrifying Demons.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/6/2009 2:14:00 PM

What a remarkable image, Tamra. Jonah "howling" poems from the belly of the Biblical whale. I agree with Daver (such a nice man); you have a very refreshing, intelligent writing style. Also, extremely creative! I'm a fan. Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin

Date: 5/6/2009 7:16:00 AM

Aha, I connected! Glad you like Juggernaut. Your style is refreshing, ideas so intelligent. Love, daver

Daver Austin

Date: 5/5/2009 2:26:00 PM

Like the mood....like the words, how they flow, really a poem in incubation. Love, daver

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/5/2009 8:23:00 AM

At "the entrance?" good contest entry! Light & Love

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/5/2009 7:14:00 AM

Yes, yes ... do the editorial work ... and leave it to become its own wine upon the mind ... powerful words, and a fantastically great and concise write ... tremendous imageries ... vast interpretations ... i love it.