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In the kingdom of Pu’u ‘O’o, domicile of Pélé summits of molten stone crowned with ginger blossoms, orchids, hibiscus, the stone hips of the wells of fire were skirted with towering fronds; the ground moved with rhythmic steps, Pélé’s Thunder drums. Joy poured down the rock red, yellow, glowing-gloss rolling like honey over the edge of the cliff, turning the surf, the tide, the brine into clouds. Sept 12 2020 Contest A Lipogram Poetry Contest Sponsor Emile Pinet

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Date: 9/26/2020 8:27:00 PM
wow Big congrats. I know how hard these poems are to do!!!
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/27/2020 4:12:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 9/14/2020 2:55:00 PM
Perfect description of Pele's fire! Such vivid words - vivid pictures. High fives and kudos on your podium win.
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/17/2020 10:06:00 AM
Thanks Sam!
Date: 9/14/2020 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations Jack, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This was one of the hardest contest I’ve ever had to judge, the quality of the poems entered were outstanding and yours was one of them my friend, Emile.
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/17/2020 10:06:00 AM
Thanks Emile!
Date: 9/12/2020 11:34:00 AM
such wonderful description Jack I have fabulous images in my minds eye, a joy to read:-) hugs jan xx
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/12/2020 1:09:00 PM
Thank you Jan, glad you enjoyed

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