Lip Balm

She leans up closer Lips to connect is our goal We find each other Our passionate kiss With the taste of strawberry Lip balm shared as one We enjoy the taste Of each other’s warm sweet lips Another kiss waits Russell Sivey Entrant into Michael Falotico's "A Kiss Like Fruit" contest

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/8/2011 5:22:00 PM

That dang lip gloss is really addictive huh? Nothing like a tasteful kiss. I enjoy reading your words. The talent is nice to come across.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/7/2011 6:11:00 AM

A belated congratulations I am sending you for your win in Michael's "A Kiss Like Fruit" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/5/2011 6:22:00 PM

Congrats Russell on a big win with this fruity luv delight luv.. thankxx for your wonderful words on my poetry luv..much appreciated..

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/5/2011 2:51:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest, sensual senryus, enjoyed reading :-)

Kash Poet

Date: 11/5/2011 6:33:00 AM

Congratulation Russell on your win.Enjoyed this passionate write very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/4/2011 8:11:00 PM

there is a reason for those fruit flavored lip balms!! Cool set of senryu, and congrats on your win.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/4/2011 3:19:00 PM

So fresh, Russell...you still got that lovin feeling, man! A wonderful win for you....You are at the top with the best of the best! Congrats, dear poet! Gwendolen

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/4/2011 2:43:00 PM

Russell my friend, you have done this contest well... a great write and win for you my friend... congrats on your 3rd place in my contest.... Michael

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/12/2011 6:06:00 PM

Sweet pucker up!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2011 1:17:00 PM

Passionate..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading ..Sara