Lioness

I thought of many an animal Wondering who I would be A cat, a dog, a goldfish A rabbit, a pet maybe The more I thought Of which animal to be A master of her elements Skillful, wild and free A Lioness is proud, strong and sure She's pure of heart Relentless in her role as mother Her cubs, never will she part If I was an animal what would I be? Contest Sponsored by: Kristen Bruni Written by: Shannon Deane

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Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/14/2011 4:24:00 PM

* “Yessss * I Surely Could See Your Precious Priceless Beauty * My Dear Sweet Beautiful & More Than Beautiful * `Beautiful Shannon` * As A Lovely Lioness In Extremes * Eloquent * Dignified * Strong * Loyal * Loving * Protective * Nuturing & Most All * Absolutely Beautiful * On & On & On & On * I Would Sit Amongst The Deserts Sun for Days * Just to Gaze Upon Your Beauties Grace * Dying From Thirst & Starvation, Yet * Believing That I Had Found * A Slice of Heaven Within * Your Endless & Magnificent Beauty * My Luv, Always & Forever * `Your Sarah.`” *

Lisa Cooper

Date: 5/18/2011 8:14:00 AM

nicely penned

Cory Long

Date: 5/17/2011 7:56:00 AM

i loved the line skillful, wild and free.. this is nicely penned. good luck to you in the contest..cory

James Fraser

Date: 5/14/2011 10:21:00 AM

I love the big cats, and the Lioness is no exception. Good luck on Kristen's contest Shannon....:)