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"In a coat of gold or a coat of red, a lion still has claws, and mine are long and sharp, my lord, as long and sharp as yours."  - From "The Rains of Castamere."

I have claws, long and sharp. They grow, I growl, stay away! A caged animal, walking up and down and up and down. Don't come near, I'll tear you open. Oh, isn't that a brave dream? Isn't that a dream of fierce independence? Isn't that a dream of surviving? A dream of conquering? Of escaping? But the day we ran, I had no claws I didn't roar. I was a mouse, silent, quick Tiptoeing close to walls Escaping through the cracks Bringing with me my brothers As quick and silent as I was And then I learned that real power Is not in anger, hate, claws and teeth But in survival and in love.

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Date: 12/9/2016 3:26:00 AM
Given a 7 for this whimsical write ;) made me smiled.
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Darren White
Date: 12/9/2016 3:44:00 AM
I love that, thank you for the 7 :)
Date: 11/21/2016 11:11:00 PM
Liked this one Darren. you might like my poem. Cat and Mouse. except mine has a different ending and message.. good writing
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Darren White
Date: 11/22/2016 2:18:00 AM
I will most certainly look up your poem now! Thank you :)
Date: 11/21/2016 10:58:00 AM
WOW!! The last two lines are so powerful!! You're poem is fantastic!! You should be really proud of yourself and your poems Darren. Great writing :)
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Darren White
Date: 11/21/2016 12:22:00 PM
Thanks! It is powerful, and I meant every word of it. You make me smile :)

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