Lion

Lives in and rules the jungle In it is strength, speed but a small waist Only fresh flesh is its delicacy Nature's deep, sinking into its fearsome voice.

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Bl Devnath

Date: 5/6/2016 10:52:00 AM

Beautiful acrostic of the King of jungle LION. 7 sure my lovely friend, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2016 11:49:00 PM

I really like what you did with LION!! The last two lines are my favorites.

Funom Makama
Date: 4/22/2016 9:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea

Red Fiery

Date: 4/20/2016 2:35:00 AM

Wonderful Acrostic my friend... Cheers !!!! You described the Lion in a briliant way

Funom Makama
Date: 4/20/2016 12:48:00 PM

Thank you so much Red Fiery

Dan Cwiak

Date: 3/27/2016 5:14:00 PM

What a wonderful way to describe the "King of the Jungle", Funom. Nicely done!

Funom Makama
Date: 4/1/2016 10:09:00 AM

Thank you very much Dan Cwiak

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/19/2016 12:34:00 AM

Hello Funom ... nice description Funom using the letters to begin each line - Lindsay

Funom Makama
Date: 3/21/2016 11:38:00 AM

Thank you very much Lindsay

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/18/2016 12:32:00 PM

- Great about the lion, Funom ! - ......... my zodiac is the lion :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama
Date: 3/21/2016 11:37:00 AM

Thank you very much Anne Lise Andresen

Jean Murray

Date: 3/18/2016 11:36:00 AM

Oh to have a small waist....I would write a poem about this lioness. Fearsome write.

Funom Makama
Date: 3/21/2016 11:37:00 AM

hahahahahahaha.... Thank you very much Murray