Links of Lies

A little of it Then a leeway You carried the day So smart. But a little of it Is never okay There shall come a day To protect it. As defence You put up another To cover up the former Then peace? Soon it dies How can it last When it was built On links of lies?

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Dave Timperley

Date: 9/7/2013 4:21:00 PM

Read all your work and enjoyed it tremendously. Many thanks for sharing. God Bless. D.

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 9/8/2013 2:43:00 AM

For real sir? Thank you so much sir.

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/20/2013 5:07:00 AM

Good delivery Michael.

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 8/20/2013 5:17:00 AM

Thanks Musty.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/20/2013 1:52:00 AM

What a brilliant write. I read through each line wondering how you would end it and the ending is superb! :) Thank you for the visit to my work! I appreciate it. :)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 8/20/2013 2:00:00 AM

Thanks for coming too. Your comment is encouraging