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Linda Lu

The performer pulled his ham string; Trying to make her sing And lying by the bedside; Terrycloth embroidered And again the bells won’t ring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/12/2012 9:16:00 AM
I wonder did he perhaps succeed.
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Leonard Taormina
Date: 9/12/2012 1:01:00 PM
Oh well at first if you don't suceed try and try again right :) thabnks for taking the time J.L.
Date: 9/5/2012 6:31:00 PM
ha ha...love these sort of rhymes! :)
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Leonard Taormina
Date: 9/12/2012 1:05:00 PM
Gwendolen I hope I can thank you without having my computer miss a beat and creating a misspelling; anyway thank you so much and so glad you got a laugh for yourself.
Date: 9/5/2012 1:42:00 PM
I am so happy to have time to read some wonderful poetry today. Glad yours was one of the pieces I was able to read Leonard. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Leonard Taormina
Date: 9/12/2012 9:19:00 PM
Miss sunshine thank you for your comment/s and taking the time to read

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