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Limitless World

I want to go and travel around the world By air, by sea or by walk, I want too... I like and love to meet other persons Try and try anything and everything fun My life and means isn't enough to travel around Yet anyhow, I am glad somehow, I found A whole new world not only of different places But of a world full of various "must see faces" Of which, I learned peculiar values Of which, I bravely pursue to be in Of which, some I immersed and loved Of which, for a lifetime I will never forget Some hugged and tried to keep me Some hold yet at the end leave me Some challenged and cursed me Yet, I rejoiced for most pushed, better me Some limits the world for the places But for me it is not, it is not! For the world, before our eyes... Before our eyes is a limitless world By olive_eloi 1:07 pm 02/24/2014 motif: philosophical CONTEST: IMPRESS ME WITH SMALL POEM V (YAY!) SPONSOR: GIORGIO A.V. 1ST PLACE (TO GOD THE GREATEST GLORY.. )

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James Fraser

Date: 12/4/2014 1:52:00 PM

It sure is a limitless world Olive, and I'm delighted you are in it to share our poetry, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/5/2014 6:12:00 AM

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/23/2014 10:00:00 AM

There is much magic within these lines. Congratulations!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/23/2014 4:41:00 PM

thaks for dropping by and seeing you again comment on my writing.. :) to God be the glory always. :)

Christopher Thor Britt

Date: 3/20/2014 11:37:00 PM

Beautiful Olive! You poem made me say, "wow". Congratulations on your 1st place win. /l\

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/21/2014 12:23:00 AM

thanks for the drop.. :) to GOd be the greatest glory.. :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 3/20/2014 9:33:00 AM

wow!!!! ...a limitless world.. that's fantastic ,OLIVE.. CONGRATULATIONS for winning the 1st PLACE!!!! ...I'm a proud Filipina.. I'm PROUD OF YOU!!!! ...^_^

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/20/2014 3:40:00 PM

thank you Aiyah.. me as well to your accomplishments here.. :) i saw and read your writings and really they are great :) IM proud being a Filipina too.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/20/2014 4:56:00 AM

Well penned write and congratulations on the fine win, olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/20/2014 3:30:00 PM

thanks sir.. :) to God always the greater glory.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2014 4:00:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest sponsored by Giorgio A.V. - A wonderful win poem from you Olive ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/20/2014 4:34:00 AM

thanks Anne Lise, :) to GOD be the greatest glory... :)

Skat A

Date: 3/20/2014 1:00:00 AM

Hi Olive, Congrats, awesome win! ~SKAT~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/20/2014 4:32:00 AM

:) thanks much SKAT, to GOD be the greater glory as always.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2014 10:36:00 PM

soup mail Olive.. This is a fine and awesome poem.. Impressive like the themes. Congratulations on your win. :) Love ~LINDA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/20/2014 4:32:00 AM

thanks.. :) to God be the greater glory as always... :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/19/2014 5:13:00 PM

Congrats Olive; most philosophical; lovely, especially 3 and 4 stanzas. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/20/2014 4:30:00 AM

:) thanks Paul, :) being far from my comfort zone really taught me a lot.. to GOD be the greater glory... :)

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 3/19/2014 3:05:00 PM

So true olive. Reach for the sky... Congratulations on the win... Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/20/2014 4:27:00 AM

Thanks Verlene, to GOD the greater glory.. :) weeeeee, i reached the skies through my dreams.. : )

Ralph Sergi

Date: 2/24/2014 6:06:00 PM

Hi Olive: Film Noir is a poem I wrote here on Soup. Check out my poems.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 2/24/2014 1:10:00 PM

Hi Olive: A beautifully worded poem and I fully echo your sentiments. Meeting different people is a far more better world than seeing places for as your learn from them , you broaden your scope of other horizons. My compliments.If you like old movies please check out my Film Noir.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/24/2014 3:53:00 PM

thank you.. :) nice for you to drop by and leaving a comment :) :) film noir? youtube/