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Limerick I

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Limerick I

There was once a funny old-man,
Who wore for a hat, a flimsy pan,
Every Christmas he'd turn blue--
Out of cold, cough and flu--
And eat his beans from a can!

*My first attempt at a Limerick*

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  1. Date: 1/1/2012 6:29:00 AM
    I feel sorry for the funny old man.... Good Akash. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU! oxox hugs Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 12:52:00 AM
    well ...u seriously did well Akash ! I liked this ..if this is first then I am sure u second will be '' no wrds in the dictionary to describe''...cheeers !

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 1:39:00 PM
    Poor funny old man. Good rhyming, Akash!