Limerick

Age forty -one this month is a chill For brother who’s not over the hill So he won’t seem unfit Got a total face lift Now he’s looking like a roasted grill --------- Fictional dedication to my older brother The Perfect Limerick Contest of Andrea Dietrich

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Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/16/2014 6:38:00 PM

Beautiful and lovely write...Congrats on your win...

Kash Poet

Date: 3/15/2014 9:01:00 PM

Enjoyed the fun here Nette.Very nice Limerick.How are you?

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/15/2014 12:24:00 PM

It's a wonderful fiction and nice dedication not only to your brother but to many. Good luck in the contest. Hugs.. and congrats on your win. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Tim Smith

Date: 3/14/2014 8:08:00 PM

Congrats on the win nette...Hugs Tim

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/14/2014 6:52:00 PM

This was fun, Nette. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Darren Watson

Date: 3/14/2014 3:35:00 PM

You are far too good at this nette . I was going to create a competition about an amorous bat but you would just hang upside down and waltz through it , lol Great limerick my friend.

Skat A

Date: 3/14/2014 12:45:00 PM

nice one Nette, Congratulations, enjoying the win. *SKAT

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/14/2014 12:20:00 PM

Makes one think twice, uh, three times about plastic surgery. Forty can be tough. :) Congrats on contest. Peace. :)

Roger Horsch

Date: 3/14/2014 10:21:00 AM

Hi Nette, Congrats on your win. I loved it.......Roger

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/14/2014 5:27:00 AM

Congratulations on the fine win in Limerick contest. Lovely humor, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2014 2:19:00 AM

Loved the humor of this one, Nette. congratulations!

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/13/2014 10:56:00 PM

Ha Ha lol, this is a tremendous Limerick, I I'm laughing a lot as I read and re-read this clever write! I can see you like to pick on your brother lovingly, I do the same with my brother whenever he's around! It is only for fun, just like this poem does to your brother...I hope you share it with him my friend! I surely loved reading this excellent piece here this evening! What a hilarious poem, Great work!!

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/13/2014 6:32:00 PM

I'd like to think 41 is old but I'm 22 years older I'm told ....good luck in the contest

Tim Smith

Date: 3/13/2014 5:19:00 PM

This one is funny nette....I love these.....Tim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/13/2014 4:46:00 PM

Good luck hon! Nice to have a brother who actually interacts with you! Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/13/2014 12:58:00 PM

- Now I understand ..... it's a limerick contest ... that is why there are so many funny limerick posted the last few days .... I love this Nette - so fun to read :)) - Good luck contest!! - Have a nice day .... it's night at your place I think - evening here :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)