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Lime Green In Pool Filter

Praying Mantis at basement door I had not seen you here before So lime green you stand out Scarey enough to make me shout Died next day in pool filter__gore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/7/2010 6:12:00 AM
Poor little praying mantis! At least she could'nt eat up the male. Nicely written and best of luck if this is for John's contest....Gert
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Date: 8/6/2010 12:52:00 PM
Cute limerick, Sara. I hate to see insects dying in pools. But you made the message delightfully lighthearted. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/6/2010 12:35:00 PM
at least you weren't too frightened. reminds me of the dream i had last night, about a bug creeping out of my mouth, and then this other guys mouth, who was with his friends.they laughed and told him "maybe you need to keep your mouth closed dude." i hope your day is great, Sara(: ~Always&Forever
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Date: 8/6/2010 10:02:00 AM
AHHH, poor mantis. I enjoyed reading this one! Luv, andrea
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Date: 8/6/2010 4:56:00 AM
A nice light-hearted limerick Sara ! -Raj
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Date: 8/6/2010 1:09:00 AM
That is sad Sara, poor Mantis, enjoyed your poem,, except the dead bird do to the pool,..p.d.
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:44:00 PM
Nice Limerick. enjoyed it, Sara
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:34:00 PM
Much enjoyed!Hope you are fine dear!C.C
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:40:00 PM
oooph! cool poem! Sara! jimbo
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:17:00 PM
Cool write Sara .. they are scary looking but called the Prophet too.. interesting I think.. great Limerick ..enjoyed ..with luv..
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