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Limbo Cake

Limbo Cake When you die before your time you go to Limbo A place for unborn and innocent souls A happy zone where the unknown play and wait Unfinished business and Birth Days are postponed There is no paper Golden pens are in supply To write messages on your heart Of a life not lived and stories of what could have been One day God will come again and take you Until that time You continue waiting For your Birth Day cake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/19/2014 3:41:00 AM
- Earl, a very well written poem - Like the idea: "To write messages on your heart" - Lovely! - Thanks for the nice visit on my last poem. - Have a nice day ..... hope it will be many ... many birthday cakes in the future for you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 6/19/2014 7:29:00 AM
Good morning Anne Lise, Thank you so much for commenting. I truly enjoy reading your works and look forward to seeing more from you. Take care. Earl
Date: 6/19/2014 1:32:00 AM
Dear Earl this is a nice one, just wandering how do we i know if my time is due.. I cant wait to read more your work
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Date: 6/19/2014 1:50:00 AM
Hi Rogers, Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments. No one knows their time. It is a mystery. We can only keep the faith. As for my other works, just click on my name above in blue. It will take you directly to my works. Thanks again. Have a great day. Earl

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