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Hell is dancing underground kiss the earth and touch the sky then say hello to a neighbor Close your eyes It smells like rose.......Burning Pray in my arms My television is in color The earth is in black and white Keep your clothes off of the ground "Please don't hurt me" Danger is Coming! We're all leaving No where to go! My child feels heat Open a window he can't breathe! I hear music! Let's dance The ground is trembling I hear a voice calling... Time to go.... What? This Isn't Heaven!

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Date: 9/1/2010 9:44:00 PM
This poem is extremely the type of write that would make someone NOT SIN! Amazing
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Date: 8/23/2010 10:10:00 PM
lol funny one,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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