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Lily On the Lake

Pretty little lily out upon the lake I'm in love with your perfect smile and every petal that you shake Floating amongst the opalescent hue on this peaceful autumn morn I'm drifting away with you Pretty little lily wearing your best white dress I can sit and gaze at you for hours and all my hopes and wishes I'll profess Reflection of beauty is all that I see in the ripples you're winking your eye so softly at me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/24/2016 6:44:00 AM
Reading this, closing my eyes, and I long for my loved one in my arms. It reads like a wonderful love poem. Thank you.
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Date: 10/20/2016 6:01:00 PM
Tim I enjoyed this poem. I also like water lillillies they are beautiful water flowers. Enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 10/20/2016 6:18:00 AM
Love the personification of the lily..I so love water-lillies.Somehow they remind me of something pure and beautiful...Lovely poemTim.
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Date: 10/19/2016 6:59:00 PM
Excellent use of metaphor Tim.
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Date: 10/19/2016 6:42:00 PM
This is a lovely poem, Tim. I'm off to the lake now, cheers /|\
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Date: 10/19/2016 6:00:00 PM
This one is just perfect. :)
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Date: 10/19/2016 3:36:00 PM
Lovely personification Tim a beauty of a poem hugs Jan xx
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