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Written, May 20, 2024
For The Contest, “Lilith”
Sponsored by Silent One

Oh, Lilith, circled by that vicious snake and draped by owl wings as a feathered shawl; hair crowned with spiraled horns for evil sake- of which the snake itself seems to appall. Oh, Lilith, your deep, luminous red eyes instill cold fear while shooting fiery glow- with a blank stare that quickly amplifies cruel dangers brooding- waiting to bestow. Oh, Lilith, your fake smile adorns your face with plump lips looking sweet as rich, red wine; yet void of love and altruistic grace- stay coldly pursed- a threatening, grim sign. Behind you- Hell's vast underworld now burns; your lover waits for you- engulfed in flame. His fiendish craving spins and wildly churns- as you join Lucifer in depths of shame.

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Date: 5/31/2024 9:36:00 AM
Sandra, fantastic write for the contest, for me this is a winner, hugs
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Date: 5/21/2024 8:28:00 AM
Dear Sandra, Lilith is captivating and haunting. The imagery of her being circled by a snake and draped in owl wings, with eyes that instill cold fear, is quite striking. I loved how your portrayal of her dark allure and the burning underworld is powerful and evocative. Your piece masterfully conveys Lilith's complex and menacing essence, leaving a lasting impression. Absolutely stunning work! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/20/2024 1:31:00 PM
Love the pic. Good luck.
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