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She was left alone Standing in the rain Even though it’s not shown She’s filled with nothing but pain. He was supposed to be with her They were supposed to have a date He was going to propose to her But he couldn’t escape his fate. What’s she to do now? He was her everything To him, she made a vow In her heart, he’s the only king. He did everything for her Not caring if their parents opposed He just wants to be with her forever To other girls, his heart is closed Her life began because of him She just realized life’s neither fair nor fun How to go on without him? what now that he's gone? His memories started with her But it ended in just a flash What of now and forever? He only left her heart a gash They both loved each other deeply What will happen now that they’re not together? An obvious answer came to me Juliet would immediately go after Romeo.?

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Date: 10/1/2010 1:16:00 PM
Let Romeo die and Juliet live, or Juliet die and Romeo live ... one death is enough to inspire the heart to cry, and you are already full of inspiration. Welcome to Poetrysoup, I would be honored to have you as friend, drop in anytime my talented friend.
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Date: 9/28/2010 5:47:00 AM
A great ode to the a great man.
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Date: 9/27/2010 8:20:00 AM
A pleasure to read your creative poetry today Haruka. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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