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Like Rain

Like Rain In the dead of night my spirit searched for meaning something it may ascertain Still darkness blinded these forlorn feelings of finding soothing verses for utter pain Fists clenched as blood surges through veins like rivers swelling, eyes shed tears like rain... Penned: 01/2023 In Town Suites West Palm Beach Florida

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/3/2023 10:54:00 AM

A lovely yet sad write. Quote "Tears are rain from the eyes." Have a blessed day writing away......................

Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/4/2023 3:42:00 PM

Sometimes, sad is what comes out of the heart. Thanks, I appreciate you!...ab

Valsa George

Date: 2/2/2023 2:59:00 AM

Once more I feel the sharpness of your quill ! It can scratch in such a way that blood begins to stain the inner layers of the mind. Great poem Anselmo

Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/4/2023 3:50:00 PM

Your fine comments make me wade through my uneventful day with vigor! Thanks as always, Valsa...ab

Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/4/2023 3:49:00 PM

Your fine comments make me wade through my uneventful day with vigor! Thanks as always, Valsa...ab

Gary Radice

Date: 1/26/2023 2:18:00 PM

A case of anger turned inward for the character in your poem Anselmo? Could be me when I've lost my muse or forget a line I had dreamed up for a poem in the middle of the night only to then forget it. :) I like your great use of metaphors. Cheers - Gary

Anselmo Boles
Date: 1/27/2023 2:27:00 PM

A fictitious work, still, like you mentioned, it may sometimes occur to the most even-tempered poetry writing soul. Thanks as always Gary!... ab

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/21/2023 12:07:00 PM

Powerful poem. May peace be with you :)

Anselmo Boles
Date: 1/24/2023 10:42:00 PM

Thanks Heidi. This one is fiction, although I strongly feel that there are people out there who go through these kinds of emotions in real life...ab