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Like parallel dimensions set apart, how varied they exist on this great earth. We are at ease within the plane where we can share as human beings from our birth. But, what about the microscopic world- unseen, but dwells within our very midst, knows not of us, but we know it; how hard to reconcile we share and coexist. With insects too...does that lone crawling ant have knowledge of our giant presence here? In its own world of blades of grass and dirt, its universe exists but ends right there. Unknown dimensions may be in our midst, invisible, immense, or have a sense not shared with that in us that see or feel- yet mingle in our presence- so intense. Our senses, see and hear, smell, taste, and touch, may not assist within dimensions that do not give signals to interpret them- and so, like ants or microbes, we react. These grand dimensions magnify beyond this tiny sphere where well-known facts disclose we're dwarfed within our milky galaxy- a speck of dust afloat in the cosmos. Like parallel dimensions set apart, how varied they exist in this great world. More mystic still, in our grand universe, what we don't know is yet to be unfurled. August 28, 2016 ~Honorable Mention~ Contest: Your Choice 4 Sponsor: Brain Strand Judged: 06/09/2019 ~9th Place~ Contest: Poetry Unhinged Sponsor: John Lawless Judged: 08/31/2016

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Date: 9/2/2016 3:05:00 PM
Now you're talking, Sandra. Quite profound ideas. :-)
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Date: 9/1/2016 6:29:00 AM
Mystic indeed:) Lovely, Sandra:) Congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 8/31/2016 8:12:00 PM
Sandra, it took me several reads to find the rhythmic cadence of this piece and settle into its subtle shifts of focus and comparison of human egos and smaller creatures plausible intelligence. A very interesting take on the contest un-theme. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/31/2016 8:40:00 PM
Thank you, John, for the interesting contest. I was pleased to be on your short list of winners. Sandra
Date: 8/31/2016 2:25:00 PM
Back to tell you congrats on your placement, Sandra.
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Date: 8/31/2016 1:51:00 PM
This is a masterpiece of conscious thought and awareness of our being in the cosmos, very deep and enjoyable.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/31/2016 9:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, John, for your very uplifting and supportive comment! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 8/31/2016 1:14:00 PM
sweet Sandra, congrats on your placement, this is beautifully written and the meter is perfect :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/31/2016 9:10:00 PM
Thank you once again, Laura, for your wonderful visits and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/28/2016 8:07:00 AM
Wow, this is great! I love this poem; such an interesting topic and so well done. Good luck on the content, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/31/2016 9:08:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes, for your positive comment! Hugs, Sandra

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