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".... could not stop for death- he kindly stopped for me- the carriage held just ourselves and immortality." Quote by _ Emily Dickinson Scenes of my life passed by at lightning speed. Everything in my being wants it to slow down, in that moment as I thought that very thought to my surprise at once, it slowed immediately. I started to see things more precisely and clearly. I studied each nuance, I was no longer blind, I was gifted with a brand-new pair of eyes. I found the beauty in any and everything I saw, things that I thought meaningless and useless; had much value and was very important to me. My heart and my soul were bubbling over with love, I appreciated all big or small life was good, Then it speeded up again and then it was over. 5/30/2023 Contest: Writing Challenge- C Quotes Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 6/10/2023 10:01:00 AM
Congrats on an amazing write and win so beautiful - i love how you touch on living, believing and one day dying, and how peacefully all this opened up for you to understand, a deep, soulful write my friend - loved it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/7/2023 5:11:00 PM
dDear Alexis, I guess what you experienced was a moment of truth, a glimpse into the unknown. So interesting!! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/7/2023 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! It can happen at anytime, any place ... the eyes are opened that they might see beyond the physical realm into the Truth. A deep of meaningful poem, Alexis. It can happen and not stop with a deeper way of life. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 6/6/2023 5:33:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning place in the contest, Alexis :) - hugs
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Date: 6/6/2023 4:04:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
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Date: 6/4/2023 8:55:00 AM
An amazing wisdom insight ~ congratulations on your win, Alexis
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Date: 6/4/2023 1:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest....Alex.
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Date: 6/3/2023 9:04:00 PM
"My heart and my soul were bubbling over with love" - immensely passionate. A very beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/3/2023 6:57:00 PM
Alexis, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done !
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Date: 6/4/2023 12:51:00 PM
Hi Constance, You always hold good contests. Thanks for my placement in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your weekend;-) Alexis
Date: 6/2/2023 4:05:00 AM
Many say that just before coming to life's halt, we see visions in a newer light, so that death will appear not dreary, but pleasant. Beautifully expressed, Alexis. All the Best in the contest.
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Date: 5/31/2023 8:25:00 PM
Alexis, this is such an imaginative poem, with captivating depictions. Beautifully expressed! :)
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Date: 5/31/2023 4:53:00 PM
Love your poem of a battle of seeking joy, peace, and overflowing love of all around us and within, May God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance: )
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Date: 5/30/2023 1:13:00 PM
this was such an interesting take on the topic. VERY nicely done, Alexis, and thanks for your recent comments to me
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Date: 5/30/2023 11:02:00 AM
Much depth you convey in this reflective poem, Alexis. We appreciate life even more as it nears its end. Splendidly done.
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Date: 5/30/2023 10:22:00 AM
Undoubtedly, the potential of lightning is immense, Alexis. Great poem with stunning imagery good luck with the contest.
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Date: 5/30/2023 8:02:00 AM
- There is no doubt that there is great power in this lightning, Alexis - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/30/2023 6:45:00 AM
Sometimes we just need to slow down and enjoy what life has to offer. Hope you're keeping well Alexis. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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