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Like Deep Waters

My mind flows like a river A river that's deep and wide Its cold touch gives me shivers On its rough-currents, I ride What lurks beneath deep waters? What dark secrets do they hide? The unknown gives me shivers Shivers send pain to my side I dived into the waters Pain increasing in my side The deep waters grew darker What dark secrets do they hide?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/10/2019 9:42:00 PM
You painted an intriguing picture with your words that kept me captivated, Joanne. A most excellent poem! :)
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Joanne Liaw
Date: 1/10/2019 9:52:00 PM
Thanks so much for reading my poem and for your encouraging words. :)

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