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Like Coming Home

"Lovers don't finally meet somewhere. They're in each other all along." ~Rumi



Entangled eons collided

     Where familiar hearts resided

          The day our eyes engaged.

               And a quickening abided:

                    I'd loved you long unsighted--

                         Like coming home assuaged. 



~by deborah burch©
4/28/2012

*Rime Couee
Title: "Like Coming Home"

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  1. Date: 7/22/2012 8:35:00 PM
    SOUPMAIL......

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 12:10:00 AM
    thank you for joining, dear deborah... nice one.. soup mail!..:)huggs!

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 1:42:00 AM
    Hi Deb! I truly love the quote you chose here-- heehee I actually never heard of Rumi but this one is so nice! And you've complemented the quote really qell with your rime couee-- never tried that form either but you I think did wonderful with it :D Lucky are they who find "home"-- really like your first line here btw-- I wish you the best in nette's contest & congrats on all your wins! :D

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/29/2012 7:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you soooo much Nikko!! :) I am honoured...and I love your new avitar! lol ...big hugs,love~deb :)
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 7:58:00 PM
    Smile ˜ You've been all over, and it's been all over you ˜ It's A Beautiful Day * See the bird with the flower in her mouth, after the floods, all the colours came out ˜ It was a beautiful day ˜ Love the poe, very sweet ˜ Always & forever, John!:) ˜

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/28/2012 8:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you John :)
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 6:32:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest...love this rhyme and how you have it set up..hugs..INK-U-SCRIPT

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/28/2012 6:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) thank you dear one...deb
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 3:54:00 PM
    You chose a wonderful quote from Rumi, Deb, and I love the way you describe falling in love. Winning wishes for you in the contst, my friend. Love, Carolyn

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/28/2012 4:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    O' thank you Carolyn :) how gracious and kind you are! It means so much. I am honoured. big hugs, love,deb
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 3:01:00 PM
    I love this !! Excellent piece my dear sweet poet. Hugs Michael

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/28/2012 3:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awwww. :) Thank you Michael! I am honoured! big hugs, love,deb