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Like Butterflies

Watching a world that seems alien, now through his old eyes He sees them in their beauty and innocence, running, smiling As if this was an adventure; a harmless fantasy of youth They pass through the gates of security to a world, without Like butterflies, he said flying off to nowhere

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/2/2015 4:22:00 PM
Excellent pen David! I enjoyed your piece, the imagery is great, my dear friend. I liked comparing youth to butterflies. A 7 from me! Thanks for visiting my pages. Much appreciated. Have a lovely day! In his light! God bless! :) D."
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David Brown
Date: 3/4/2015 11:02:00 AM
Thank you very much, Dorian.
Date: 2/25/2015 6:49:00 PM
nodding in agreement david, nowhere land is nobody's business
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David Brown
Date: 2/26/2015 2:32:00 PM
Thank you very much Steven

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