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Like Butter

Churning like butter Thoughts of you Bright and yellow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 3/12/2013 7:42:00 AM
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strong word! congrats on ur win
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Ralph Taylor
Date: 3/7/2013 4:27:00 PM
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Congrats, Susan. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/6/2013 9:40:00 PM
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SUSAN, ;-) congratulations with your awesome win, in my contest. always~ LINDA
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/2/2012 7:14:00 PM
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ha,, like butter.. this is the proper title.. for someone whom melts you and warms you and shines you.. bright and yellow.. mmmm butter.. bet your thoughts stir pretty much.. excellent ..pd
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Harry Horsman
Date: 4/22/2012 4:51:00 AM
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brilliant Senryu, this is so clever Susan. harry
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Karen Croft
Date: 4/20/2012 7:19:00 PM
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i like!!!
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 4/17/2012 9:49:00 AM
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That last line sure gives it such a witty twist! I didn't know what to expect when I read your title Susan, and I love how it turned out :D Made me smile!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/16/2012 10:52:00 PM
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wow, this is so clever. You are getting to be the master of very short and cute free verse!(I think maybe it could be senryu!)
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Black Eyed Susan
Date: 4/17/2012 7:10:00 AM
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I debated on senryu or free verse. Looks like it should be a senryu. majority rules :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 4/16/2012 4:16:00 PM
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Wow, I like this a lot! It could be a senryu, maybe? Just brilliant! Blessings, Rhonda
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 4/16/2012 8:50:00 AM
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This so nice. Kathy
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