Like a Vamp

I stand infront of a mirror... Beholding my reflection in an hour.. As Slowly, I am amused to devour.. I notice changes more and more.. Have I grown old that fast? Stressors and problems that pass I sighted it's effects that may last.. I do not like to gush and rush.. For I want to enjoy in as much.. Tic tac! tic tac!, says the clock.. Don't get stuck, Don't get stuck.. Liking myself from a boulder or a rock.. Though a wind flows strongly aghast.. There's assurance it will not break or crack.. outside, I wanted to be like that.. yet inside, nothing but a soft firm lass.. Good or bad experiences, I have.. Not that I don't care as long as I'm love.. I don't want to rough but definitely tough.. Fearless yet Heart-full like a vamp.. (C) olIVE ELOISA cONTEST: A POEM YOU HAVE NOT ENTERED #5 sPONSOR pOET DESTROYER 8TH PLACE

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James Fraser

Date: 10/18/2014 2:39:00 PM

Ooo to meet this Vamp. The Dark side has been underlying since 2013 - James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/18/2014 11:57:00 PM

ahahhahha :P :P :P no no no.. :)!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/10/2014 4:16:00 PM

I see what you are doing,, you are replying to all past comments... very XOOL... Linda

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/24/2014 6:46:00 AM

Beautiful write Olive ! U hv unique wonderful thots n a great pen ,,, so here sweetie for a win ! Congrats !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 4:09:00 PM

Thank you dr. Upma.. :) your comments are very much welcomed. :)

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 5/24/2014 12:26:00 AM

Congrats on your win..hugs Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 4:08:00 PM

Thanks Verlena.. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/23/2014 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations Olive_eloi! A vamp!!! the secret is out...now I know what happens at night!:) Loved the poem and the thought behind it. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 4:08:00 PM

Thanks for the comments.. :D

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 4:07:00 PM

hahahah :D lools yees and ill gone sip and suck some bloods and brains.. ;loools esh hada... ?!!! id rather sleep and be a baby than ever be a vamp by looks.. :D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/23/2014 10:25:00 AM

OLIVE, Congratulations, . I hope you don't mind your placement in my contest. Out of past experience, I know many don't like when I don't have a first or second placement. However, this is my judgment, and it only feels right, to place each poem, in the order I would have, as if there had been a first or second placement. Believe me, I'm not taking from you or your winning poem. Hugs, and enjoy my blog, "Conundrum" if you'd like. Have yourself a sweet day. ...always Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 4:06:00 PM

I don't mind Linda.. :) Thanks mumumuuuch.. :) GBu