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Like a Thief In the Night -Thinking of September 11th

Another morning I got up and my thoughts returned here. Just wanted to put something of the memory that lingers still today from scenes we saw of September 11th. Scenes we would like to but will never and should never forget. I do not wish to cause further despair to anyone but if anything bring some hope to those who are suffering safe in the knowledge that they have the world behind them. What has happened cannot be undone but with strength and assistance from those who had the core torn from them as the horrors unfolded and they watched on in disbelief we can be there for one another. We can make sure the memory of this tragic affair lives on, and in doing so help keep our own souls alive and kicking... in hope all was not in vain, but that we shall learn from it and let the promise of peace win through. My heart and thoughts go out to all. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It doesn't matter today if we build a building of immense height like North and South towers of World Trade Centre even if to use as defence system just as we would have built a castle on a hill in times gone by - times have changed New buildings and memorials will now stand in recognition of who/what was on said land Their memories will always continue as will the vision on t.v. all did view Where minds stood still in disbelief while strike after strike we all felt grief Where tears were shed by billions of eyes War was declared with no defence in skies It doesn't matter today we most probably wouldn't even see as our enemies approached Like a thief in the night they came stealing from us that most precious those whom we loved or cared about What matters today is that for all eternity history has been made Times we cannot change Broken genealogical lines gone forever Marks made on the landscape - irreplaceable Never can anything stand for what was again Humanity and psychological effect remains We may not all have lost those known to us but we stand together shoulder to shoulder Encircling those that remain Knowing each one of us had our soul torn Our eyes darkened by Hells darkest Angels When none could believe that before their eyes Planes came crashing through the skies Out of ashes a phoenix, a nation arises and with it the world reawakens We will not sleep but remember A tragic time when so high a cost was paid with unknowing souls now recognised What right to take such brave innocent lives

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Date: 1/16/2011 7:40:00 AM
Emotional write Anna-Marie and a fateful eventful day in American History forever etched in our hearts and souls.. I live right outside New York and it was brutal to see this happen but your words are touching and uniquely reflective of the emotions that transpired that horrific moment.. billions of tears and still... tremendous piece luv..
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Date: 1/15/2011 9:14:00 AM
You have said this so well; it is as if I am back there on September 11 again. Thank you for writing this. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Very well deserved. Deb
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Anna-Marie in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Dazzle Us With History". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2011 8:04:00 AM
Congrats, Anna-Marie. Outstanding write. Enjoyed. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 1/14/2011 4:18:00 AM
Hi Anna-Marie. Congratulations on your achievement with this fine historical piece, Eamon
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Date: 1/13/2011 5:33:00 PM
congrats..its obvious that you put a lot of thought and care into this winning poem. BG
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:15:00 PM
Warm congratulations on your fine win in the History Contest, Anna-Marie. Any thing that reminds me of 911 always bring fresh tears.. Remarkable work! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:08:00 PM
Good reminder of that fated day..Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 1/13/2011 1:05:00 PM
Many congratulations Anna-Marie on your win in the history contest. Your words relive this tragic day in Sept 2001. It's another of those moments in history where one remembers where they were. Well done once again....:)
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Date: 1/13/2011 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations Anna, on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:28:00 AM
A very emotional part of history, well described. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:02:00 AM
Anna-Marie, Congratulations on your win with this outstanding poem. James and I judged separately assigning points to all 37 entries and the competition was incredible. Just tabulating the rankings took hours. Take pride in your accomplishment. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/11/2011 10:27:00 PM
wow, one of the best I have ever read about 9/11. This one has got to score high if it's for the history contest. I have seen about three others that were simply outstanding!! And many others that were far better than my own entry! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/11/2011 7:37:00 PM
Very nice poem....Jimmy
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Date: 1/11/2011 1:50:00 PM
Anna - This is a lovely piece ! Take no notice of the barmies on this site !! They can't even spell defence properly !!
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Date: 1/11/2011 9:21:00 AM
Anna-Marie, I was among the many who watched the second strike on TV as it occurred. Your poem recalls a tragic time, but it also provides hope that we can survive such tragedies by standing "together shoulder to shoulder" and try to prevent a similar occurrence in the future. It would make a great entry for the history contest. One more slot is available - just check the spelling of defense. Hope you'll consider entering it. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/11/2011 5:10:00 AM
A very interesting and powerful poem.
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