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Like a Song

This is a song i wrote, i don't know how i feel about it, so let me know what ya think! If life were like a fairy tale I’d be your princess And you my prince. We’d live in our castle Happily ever after The End. But life isn’t like a story Where everything’s alright It’s more like a song- It seems to end Just as it begins. The pain and hurt Will devour and consume. Your soul will lie with the dead. Chorus- Because it’s… Too late But it’s never too late to say I love you. Say I miss you when you’re gone. When the door is closed Act like it’s open Tear it down And go inside ‘cause baby you’re a…. You’re alive So? If you can’t be with me Can’t you at least promise That you’ll never again Leave? If love were easy Everyone would have it The chase would be Eliminated. We’d be together baby Now and forever we wound Be on top of the world…. But love isn’t like a movie Sometimes there’s no happy ending It’s more like a song It seems to end Just as it begins. The pain and hurt Will devour and consume Your soul will lie with the dead. Chorus Why did you have to lie to me? (lie to me) You promised you’d love me to the end of eternity. But I guess words are weak And so is your heart I never thought We’d be apart But the sun eventually sets (Softly) So did love. Chorus But love isn’t like a movie Sometimes there’s no happy ending It’s more like a song It seems to end Just as it begins.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/24/2010 7:35:00 AM
I think it is a nice song
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Date: 2/24/2010 3:48:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Erin. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Please continue writing Excellent. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2010 4:43:00 PM
So very sad. This could make a beautiful song. Thanks for sharing.
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