Get Your Premium Membership

Like

Finely chopped Basil atop red tomato bisque A soup as fine as a sweet kiss from tender warm lips that risk Licorice scent adorns lean beef and carrot stew Like sweet surrender to a love that recently renewed Green glowing chopped chives dancing in butter alive Alluring adorable lover dance 'pon motion thrive Tasty heavenly honey mixed with Cajun spice A little sweet with spicey desire sexy sugar nice Like food love tempts all senses and brings to them life Romance steps softly to lead the way to taste spice twice Sponsor: Sheri Fresonke Harper Contest: Alliteration, Assonance, Consonance Couplet Alphabet Written: December 12, 2013 Couplets in Poulter's Measure 12 syllables first line/14 syllables second line

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/27/2013 7:31:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2013 8:23:00 AM
Your poem is making me hungry. A very nice win Sara.....Hugs....Roger
Login to Reply
Date: 12/26/2013 7:43:00 PM
Lovely poem with alliteration and congratulations on your fine win, sara
Login to Reply
Date: 12/26/2013 4:01:00 PM
way to go, sara. I 'm glad you are in the top ten!!! Congrats.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/26/2013 2:46:00 PM
Sara, your rich use of detail enhanced by allteration, makes an interesting poem about the affect of food on us all. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/20/2013 10:04:00 AM
bEAUTIFUL POEM!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/17/2013 9:35:00 AM
Sexy lip smacking alliteration poem. Shows how very young at heart u r. Enjoyd yor poem. Mery xmas
Login to Reply
Date: 12/17/2013 7:19:00 AM
wishing you good health, dear sara.. huggs!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/16/2013 1:37:00 PM
beautifully crafted piece
Login to Reply
Date: 12/16/2013 9:08:00 AM
What wonderful sensations. You'll excuse me now, I can't stay and write longer because I must get something to taste.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/15/2013 5:06:00 PM
happy monday, sara... msiing your new write, got one?.. huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 12/15/2013 3:54:00 PM
That was so complicated to me I have tried I applaud you with all the restrictions you wrote a nice poem! [& I didn't get the alphabet thing what did she meant let me know] Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 12/14/2013 6:44:00 PM
hi Sara lovely poem but it made me hungry all the talk of food lol. gl in contest and merry Christmas Shadow x smile hug
Login to Reply
Date: 12/14/2013 4:54:00 PM
lovely write here, Sara - hope it's a big winner
Login to Reply
Date: 12/14/2013 1:33:00 PM
written in a most delicious technique.. really effective and fllowing with assonance, sara... there you go again!.. huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 12/14/2013 12:37:00 AM
hey what a sweetly spicy way to do this contest. Great creativity and using food to do it!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/13/2013 6:02:00 PM
Hi Sara, A most well crafted and tasty write! Ken
Login to Reply
Date: 12/13/2013 4:35:00 AM
I love both sexy and food. Superb ingredients, excellently combined.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2013 9:01:00 PM
Now this write has made mew hungry! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, such a glorious poem! Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2013 6:34:00 PM
So true Sara. I must remember this tomorrow at work. Chop chop.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2013 3:28:00 PM
This is a really worthwhile read Sara, here's wishing you all the best for a winner, Joe..)
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2013 2:14:00 PM
You are making me chuckle at your spice!!!! Luv ya girl....
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2013 1:17:00 PM
- Mmmm .... I come to your home cooked dinner Sara! - "Smells heavenly" ! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2013 12:56:00 PM
the formula worked and so did the recipe quite a change from your regular work. it worked for me.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2013 8:10:00 AM
lovely write Sara...I enjoyed it...
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things