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Light's Effusion

Light splashes my eyes as the moon seems to sense I’m here. Effusion shows me its suspense And its divine effect on me. Is my love seeing it too, As it grips us, traps us, deep in effervescent blue? When I think of Hanukah, and all it means to me. Eventually I’ll realize my inner dreams. Will he?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/25/2012 2:03:00 PM
This is good. I WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR. AND HAPPY HANUKAH.
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Date: 12/9/2012 7:00:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..I feel that it has a religious meaning..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2012 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Kindle the Lights" contest James. Love Carol
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Date: 12/5/2012 7:58:00 PM
nice win~SKAT
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Date: 12/5/2012 7:41:00 AM
James congratulation on your winning light. connie
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Date: 12/5/2012 6:41:00 AM
Goodmorning James, Thanks so much for writing for my contest! Congrad's on your winnning entry. And I SO love it was about Hanukah..Light & Love
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Date: 12/5/2012 1:54:00 AM
Congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading it. :) - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/5/2012 1:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win friend James. cheers!!! Maria
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Date: 12/4/2012 10:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, James! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/4/2012 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations James xx
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Date: 12/4/2012 6:20:00 PM
Wonderfulwrite, Congrats!! Jag
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Date: 12/4/2012 4:46:00 PM
James, , ;-) congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA
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Date: 12/2/2012 8:07:00 PM
James, you will pull through this dream... some hole to fall in... love the light and moon sense... xox~pd
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