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Lights

I look up. Twinkling lights of night keeping me awake, Burning bright into the night. Why would you lie, Twinkling lights of night keeping me awake? Cartridge on cartridge rotting away. Why would you lie, Fill me with hope and burn out like a damp cigarette? Cartridge on cartridge rotting away, Now just ash of a once lighter youth. Fill me with hope and burn out like a damp cigarette. The stars that I knew have now fallen and are now as small as a cigarette butt. Now just ash of a once lighter youth, Burning bright into the night. The stars that I knew have fallen and are now as small as a cigarette butt. I burn out.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/10/2015 9:41:00 PM
Izzy,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/8/2015 8:13:00 AM
- The year 2015 is new, and I look forward to many more poems from you - Welcome to P - Soup, Izzy - Well done, I enjoy reading your first moving written poem - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/6/2015 11:16:00 PM
hi Izzy a warm welcome to Soup what a novel first poem I love it a 7 rating. Join in and comment on some poems and people will read and comment on yours we are a friendly bunch hugs
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Date: 1/6/2015 10:19:00 PM
A sad poem...but an intriguing one! :-) john.
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