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Lightning Storm

the birth a partial breeze. gentle wind teases air, carries fine rain into my face – as tears Slowly, sky curtain rises to unveil the promise of a storm. a hurricane unfolds. wind shakes all elements. nature’s manic drama begins – thunder then lightning soaks darkness. Rooted to my seat, I breathe my fill of storm’s wrath. Mere mortal peers on the edge of danger.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/26/2015 12:38:00 PM
unfolds into a great poem. good job. I like "nature's manic drama begins." very creative
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Josefina Costales
Date: 6/27/2015 4:07:00 PM
THANKS for your inspiring comment
Date: 6/26/2015 12:38:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your Cinquain chain..Very descriptive wrk..Sara
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Josefina Costales
Date: 6/27/2015 4:10:00 PM
I see you have written a lot of cinquains - I should read them sometime, as I'm still learning how to do it. I like this form also. Thanks for your comment

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