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Lightning

Nature's fireworks crackling, popping, flashing light boom of thunder heard

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/7/2010 6:22:00 PM
I agree with Karen. The imagery stands out and describes lightning's appearance and sound very well! Great haiku, Amy. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/7/2010 5:44:00 PM
Good use of sound imagery. I like the active nature of this poem. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Keep on writing! Karen
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