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Lighten Up

Lighten up! Don’t lose your mind, losing Looking back, you've had lucky breaks Learning lessons from mistakes Letting loose with license Leave early, come late Live and let live Love's losers Leap then Look written September 26, 2013 Reason A. Poteet

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Date: 10/23/2013 8:32:00 PM
Reason,, awesome Nonet form :) congrats... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:28:00 PM
Reason, . CONGRATULATIONS... XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 10/21/2013 5:46:00 PM
Very clever and wise advice. Rally like your take on old age. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/21/2013 10:23:00 AM
Very clever! Congrats on your winning nonet, Reason! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/20/2013 8:59:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 10/20/2013 1:13:00 AM
well done !
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Date: 10/19/2013 11:57:00 AM
Unique and potent. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:44:00 AM
loved your unique message, and big congrats to you.
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Date: 10/18/2013 6:31:00 AM
Congrats on the win in my contest, Reason
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Date: 9/28/2013 6:41:00 PM
Like Becca, I too am impressed with those last lines. I liked how you began with all L's. Nice touch!
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Date: 9/26/2013 9:25:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, Reason
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Date: 9/26/2013 12:37:00 PM
Look before you leap is always an apt thing to do.
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