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Light To Guide the Way

True light from within, Brings echoes of splashing waves. Guiding them through caves.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2010 6:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Guiding Light contest Marty. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 4/22/2010 6:21:00 PM

congratulations Marty on a fine presentation, and wine in Raul's contest. Agape, Moses

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/22/2010 3:30:00 PM

An excellent one Marty........Charma

Kim M

Date: 4/22/2010 2:04:00 PM

Clever use of the sense of sound. Echoes in the caves as one is guided out of the darkness is completely sensational. (I can also feel the irritating splatter of water and I can almost smell dankness from your words!)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/22/2010 2:01:00 PM

Congrats Marty on your winning poem in Raul's contest... perfect words for the photo and a sweet win for u from the "Sweetheart"

Rick Parise

Date: 4/22/2010 1:47:00 PM

Congrats to you~very nice~rick

Date: 4/22/2010 1:34:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for a creative perspective. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Keep on writing! Enjoy your success. Karen