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Unrhymed couplets By five giving a ten out of ten A vision behind words
Colours the rainbows end wetting the eyes as gold paints destiny love unique A heart flies blessed conquered kneels Before joy within enters yields to happiness The most loving feelings hold forever Greatest power ever gifted to man precious They will be the memories we make looking back reliving our dream beginning over and over again You part the dead Sea bringing life into the deep waters bathing within

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Date: 5/25/2016 12:45:00 AM
beautiful sweet words liam
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Date: 5/22/2016 8:16:00 PM
Your poem shines throughout !!! Your words can really move your readers as they are drawn towards each and every word you write!! Excellent and A7,,,~Cheers~Red~
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Date: 5/22/2016 6:50:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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