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Light of Lovers

Sensuous sounds of love whisper their song of plight amid empurpled trees fading with sun's pale light. Starlings transmute to stars as lovers’ hands entwine with feelings of passion, as demure dreams align. Two embrace the moment sharing ardent glances. Promises are offered as evening advances. Morning is yet away, sunrise is not in sight. Just the light of lovers shines in their eyes tonight.

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/28/2024 9:53:00 AM

Romantic and sensuous all in one, Linda...and you have some really delightful phrasing. May those stars shine both in the sky and in lovers' eyes! ~ Regards // paul

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/28/2024 11:41:00 AM

Hello my friend. I appreciate your visits today Paul. Many thanks for your many sweet comments. Linda :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/26/2024 4:39:00 PM

Dear Linda, This is a beautiful and sensual piece. The imagery of the "emburpled trees" and "stars transmuting to stars" creates a dreamlike atmosphere for the lovers' connection. The line "demure dreams aligning" adds a touch of sweetness to their shared longing. The poem ends on a captivating note, highlighting the lovers' light shining brighter than the coming sunrise. It's a beautiful testament to the power of love's illumination. Linda this is a romantic and evocative poem! - Blessings, Daniel

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/27/2024 1:00:00 PM

You are too kind Daniel. I truly appreciate your thoughtful and in-depth comments. smiles and blessings :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/26/2024 8:15:00 AM

a lovely romance poem, Linda. I especially liked the 2d verse...beautiful words for a wonderful emotion and experience. enjoy your day, Sara

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/27/2024 12:59:00 PM

Hello sweet Sara. Thank you for your many visits and kind comments. :)