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Light of God

Light of God I travel far on Angels wings As I pass by the Valley of the Kings Where the rich and poor play their game But for me, everything stays the same I travel far to the end of time Where God awaits my calamitous climb I’ve lived a life strong and well But have seen the pits of bitter hell The cosmos now will swallow me whole To unleash my fragmented fertile soul Journey I must through endless space So I may find my final finite place Now I see the layered light of God And His many Angels flying squad. Jan.03.2017 CONTEST 257 any form, any topic max of 32 lines Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/5/2017 4:10:00 PM
this is written in a glorious way and i am awed, WW.. sweet congrats!
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Date: 1/5/2017 1:45:00 PM
Interesting last line. Great poem about our final journey. Congrats on your win WW! :-)
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Date: 1/4/2017 9:29:00 AM
Hi WW, Not only was this well executed Sonnet.It was so beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed taking this journey with you. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/4/2017 9:00:00 AM
Wing Man, this is such a beautiful sonnet. I hope I get to meet you there:)
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Date: 1/4/2017 4:13:00 AM
- A deep and lovely poem, W.W. - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/3/2017 9:30:00 PM
Pretty awesome stuff WW!! I felt swept away..." on Angels' wings...pass by the Valley of the Kings" and more...WOW!! Best wishes for the contest!! Big Hugggs!! Deb
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Date: 1/3/2017 9:16:00 PM
Quite a large-scale range and scope, here, WW. : ) "The cosmos now will swallow me whole//To unleash my fragmented fertile soul <~~~ gave me serious goosebumps. Love it!
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