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Light of God

Buried with souls of the plundered Plundered they watch through eyes of ghosts Ghosts entombed in cribs of darkness Darkness freed, by the light of God Nette Onclaud’s Poetry Contest – Four Lines Only Visual #3 7 June 2015

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Robert Lindley

Date: 6/18/2015 6:22:00 PM

Super 7 on this fine gem my friend. So much said in such few words!

Judy Konos

Date: 6/15/2015 5:06:00 AM

saw you on Nette's blog...inspired me to "check it out" and it's a WOW WOW

Constance La France

Date: 6/13/2015 4:58:00 PM

Mark, your poem is dark, vivid and telling, wonderful write 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, no headstone

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2015 1:26:00 PM

oh wow, I really like yours. Mine was the same theme. Except you took yours into the light while I focused on the "ghosts" that remain!!

Thabang Ngoma

Date: 6/9/2015 12:06:00 PM

Hi Mark...this is such an amazing write because it rings true-you could be in the deepest darkest parts, but only the light of God shall free you...rgds, 7habang

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/8/2015 2:07:00 AM

cribs of darkness... eyes of ghosts... love those lines.. magnetic!~olive eloisa

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/7/2015 7:51:00 PM

I love your interpretation of the picture, Mark...well done! I've read a few #3s. It seems to be a popular choice...best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/7/2015 6:19:00 PM

This is a very good poetic interpretation of the visual, as well, Mark! I enjoyed it, and good luck to you :)