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Light My Fire-Lanterne

Light my fire... Kiss my cheek close my eyes wet sloppy tongue ACK! inspired by the Light my fire Lanterne contest by Brian Strand

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/18/2009 4:27:00 PM

Oops, didn't realize you had already won the contest. Congratulations!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/18/2009 4:26:00 PM

Great sense of humor, Trudy! I hope you light a fire in the contest with this great write! Love, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/18/2009 8:08:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS-Trudy--well deserved--charma

Brandee Augustus

Date: 7/14/2009 1:48:00 PM

Definitely an appropriate ending to your lanterne. It was quite funny. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest.

Judith Angell Meyer

Date: 7/13/2009 8:17:00 PM

Euwwww ... Must have been Rugar! Congratulations on winning a place in Brian's contest Trudy. Now, what is next! ~M~

Date: 7/13/2009 3:05:00 PM

Love the reaction in the last line. I got a chuckle out of this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/13/2009 3:02:00 PM

~lol~ Congrats Trudy on your win! Awesome!!! Love, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2009 2:24:00 PM

Trudy, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/13/2009 1:00:00 PM

great success in Brian's contest! Trudy! and thanks for your kind comments...jim

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/13/2009 7:27:00 AM

Congratulations, Trudy!! Great job!! :) Carrie

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/13/2009 1:24:00 AM

Trudy, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 7/13/2009 1:05:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Trudy .Rgds Brian My latest contest Motto is now open

Daver Austin

Date: 7/9/2009 8:44:00 AM

Yeah, and halitosis too. YUCK! Enjoyed mucho.daver

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/8/2009 5:34:00 PM

Made me chuckle with this one!! :) ~Carrie

James Fraser

Date: 7/8/2009 1:03:00 PM

Kool poem Trudy, all the best in Brian's contest>>James

Jim Wilson

Date: 7/8/2009 10:03:00 AM

Very enjoyable, with a nice twist at the end.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/8/2009 9:28:00 AM

Trudy, I love your Lanterne. Good luck in the contest. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/8/2009 8:03:00 AM

This is excellent..best wishes in the contest.

Brian Strand

Date: 7/8/2009 7:50:00 AM

Thank yo for supporting my contest Trudy.Rgds Brian

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/8/2009 7:34:00 AM

Trudy seems we receive the same type of love - just lucky I guess, God Bless, YF4L - MJ