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Light In the Dark

years later our lives still ignite this spark that beacon holds us tight in its grip ever so slowly we make light in the dark nothing more than an innocent lark a vision became these passionate trips years later our lives still ignite this spark I recall taking care exactly where to park my emotions for they seemed ready to slip ever so slowly we make light in the dark I was nervous and afraid as we embarked would moonglow be enough to land our ship years later our lives still ignite this spark this candor my sweet may seem a bit stark I need no sun rays to find your lips ever so slowly we make light in the dark to live in shadows to withhold remarks to find solace the right switch to flip years later our lives still ignite this spark ever so slowly we make light in the dark

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Date: 1/31/2018 3:10:00 PM
I love this Villanelle and the audio version is great! You have a very nice voice.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 2/2/2018 12:48:00 PM
Thanks Val. Your support means a lot. All the best.....peace!
Date: 11/9/2017 5:42:00 AM
Great poem, great feelings!
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Ricky Muse
Date: 11/9/2017 9:20:00 AM
Thanks for stopping bye Stina. All the best...............peace!
Date: 9/24/2017 6:00:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed reading! You are very talented.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 9/24/2017 9:33:00 AM
Thanks for your support..........peace!
Date: 9/5/2017 3:25:00 AM
I like this one, Richard. You have definately captured a sense of warmth and closeness. // Barry
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Ricky Muse
Date: 9/6/2017 12:27:00 PM
Thank you my friend. This poem was inspired by an old flame. Thanks again for stopping bye..................peace!

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